Thursday, August 30, 2007

progress on jack

two chapters are finished... i'm up to the first paragraph of chapter three. this is another major revision scene, which requires me to weave pieces from a previous chapter in with new stuff, while deleting probably two thirds of the existing scene. but enough for today... i leave jack staring at a rain-coat clad waif in a white raincoat while all around him, a vampire party dissolves into a drug bust....

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